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How to write a good college essay?

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Hey EM, I'm going to be applying to colleges soon, and because my GPA sucks (3.28) I have to do phenomenal on the SAT and write a fantastic college essay if Im going to apply and actually be considered. While I've already taken the SAT, I still need help writing the personal statements and essays. Do you have suggestions? How personal should it be? Thanks for your imput!

(The schools I'm applying to UC Santa Cruz, Riverside, and Merced, UW Seattle, UoArizona, UNLV, and UL - Chicago)

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tom brady has everything but me
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I'm undecided
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Don't listen to Peta
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Kelly says


Peta says

Next question


favorite color?


Who do you think is cuter:
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Don't listen to Giga
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Smorlicious have you ever thought about studying somewhere outside of USA
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Yes
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Would you still use shampoo if Tom Brady didn't?
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I was kidding idiot of course I use shampoo
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Peta says

I don't use shampoo


What do you use then
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peta thats gross

natural oils make your hair grease
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whatever f u trick i'm gonna go cuddle with my dog for the next 3 days
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I don't use shampoo
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Peta says

Dude you suck at insulting people


I wasn't insulting you.
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Peta says

I don't have a favorite color because I'm not a child


what kind of shampoo do you use?
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actually, nbt has proof i'm 18 so f*** off peta he's not delusional
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Dude you suck at insulting people
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animegayboy69 says

he's white though


You would have to ask Peter what specific "shade" of white he is, though.
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OK I told hi
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OK Utah
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peta tell nbt I said hello
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i'm as 17 as nbt is white
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AMime, did you tell nbt that you're like 17 or something? Because he literalyl believes that