Your writing is spectacular, bitsy! You should be a writer. On a side note, about "Mrs". Dooze, that character is interesting. I hope to see an extension to your story about she and her husband got married and became a teacher
Plissken got up and they stared at eachother. Jamal saw the hurt in Plissken's eyes as it painfully pierced his heart. Luckily, Mrs. Dooze came into the classroom and they sat down. Jamal put his head down trying not to think about how much he hurt Plissken. Him and Plissken were life-long friends. How did it come to this? He hated himself for hurting Plissken like that. Sadbox class ended and it was now P.E. Jamal used this as a chance to talk to Plissken. The lockerroom was empty, and it was only Jamal and Plissken in there. "Plissken..." Jamal said softly putting his hand on Plissken's bare back. He felt Plissken flinch. Plissken hung his head down. "I'm really sorry buddy." Jamal murmurred in his ear. Jamal felt Plissken shaking as he spoke in his ear. He put his arms around Plissken's chest and hugged him tightly. Jamal could feel Plissken's heart thumping fast. Plissken didn't say anything and Jamal was worried. "I forgive you, Jamal." Plissken mumbled. "I love you Plissken." Jamal said. "I love you too, Jamal." Plissken replied. they kissed, the end
Jamal continued to avoid Plissken for the next week. Plissken was hurt badly and Jamal could see it. He could see that every time Plissken looked at him, his eyes would get watery. Jamal and Plissken were in math class with all the other sandbox kids. "Jamal.." A classmate whispered. "What happened to you and Plissken?" "Nothing." Jamal said sadly. The teacher, Mrs. Dooze, had to leave the classroom to take a phone-call. "Ey, Jamal!" Bebop, the school bad-boy yelled. "You a homo?" "No," Jamal replied calmly. "That's gross." Jamal did not want to anger Bebop because he knew what power Bebop had. Bebop could ban anyone from the school if he felt like it! "Really!? Cause Plissken's over here tellin' everyone!" Bebop laughed at Jamal. Jamal stared at Plissken with a mean look. "Bet you won't do anything about it cause you're gay!" A classmate hollered at him. Jamal got out of his seat and walked over to Plissken. "You wanna tell everyone I'm gay?" Jamal said. "I didn't say anything Jamal! He's lying!" Plissken stammered. "I don't believe you" Jamal said cracking his knuckles. "Get up now you worm." "Fight! Fight! Fight!" The class yelled.
"WHAT IS IT MOM?!" Plissken said trying to hold in his rage. "Look, you're cousin just had a baby!" His mother said showing him a picture of his newborn nephew. "His name is Kian! Isn't he adorable?" Plissken sighed. "Yes, he is cute mom. Can I leave?" "No, no! I want to show you more pictures of him!" His mother said flipping through her gallery. --10 minutes later-- Jamal was bored in Plissken's room. He thought about the kiss. He just kissed a boy! It was gay and Jamal was ashamed of himself. Gays were disgusting creatures that should be stoned to death. Jamal cleansed his mouth not knowing what to do and went back into Plissken's room. Plissken finally returned and sat down by Jamal. "Want to continue?" Plissken asked with a cute smile. "No, that was really gross." Jamal said looking away. "I'm straight, I don't like boys." "What do you mean it was gross?! You're the one who shoved his tongue in my mouth!" Plissken replied confused. "I regretted it right after.. I just didn't take it out because I didn't want to hurt you." Jamal said looking into Plissken's eyes. Plissken stood up and balled his fists. He looked down at Jamal with a tear running down his eye. "Well you hurt m-me even more by messing with my d@mn feelings!" Plissken yelled. "Pliss- "GET OUT!" Plissken managed to shout. "But Pli- "I SAID GET OUT, JAMAL!" He somehow managed to get out. Jamal got up and walked towards the door. He looked back at Plissken, who was sobbing and hiding his face. Jamal opened the door and left the room.
this is probably why jamal doesn't like gays ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
"Jamal, I need to tell you something." Plissken said "What is it, Pliss?" Jamal asked, looking down at him with an innocent look. "We-well..." Plissken started. He looked away blushing at Jamal's gaze. "Look at me." Jamal murmurred. Plissken did so and looked into Jamal's sparkling eyes. He never knew his eyes were so pretty. "What were you going to tell me?" Jamal asked. Plissken's eyes narrowed, he grabbed Jamal's collar and pulled him in for a kiss. He was surprised to feel Jamal kissing him back. Jamal forced his tongue into Plissken's mouth. Plissken did the same as they explored eachother's mouth. "PLISSKEN!" his mother called. Plissken let go of Jamal and growled in anger. "PLISSKEN?!" his mom called again. "I'M COMING MOM!!!" Plissken yelled furiously. Plissken wiped his mouth and stomped out of his room.
"Mom, I'm going to Pliss's house today." JamalMarley told his mother. "Wait, I want to give you something." His mom said giving him a little box. Jamal's mother knew him and Plissken were gay for eachother. Jamal opened the box and immediately closed it. "Mom!" He yelled blushing. "I told you I'm not gay! This is gross!" Jamal gave the box back to his mother and left the house slamming the door. Plissken's house was across from his. Their parents were close friends and allowed the boys to visit eachother frequently. Jamal made his way over to Plissken's house and knocked on the door. Plissken's mom opened the door. "Oh hello Jamal, how are you?" She said scooting away so he could walk in. Jamal smiled at her and hurried into Plissken's room. He opened the door to see Plissken playing his Play Station 4 as usual. "Hey Jam." Plissken said with a lollipop in his mouth. "Oi Pliss, I got something funny to tell you." Jamal chuckled shutting the door. "My mom thinks we're gay!" Plissken didn't think this was funny. He turned his head trying to hide a blush and Jamal sat by him. Plissken's heart beated to Jamal. Infact, he loved Jamal since they were 13. He had never told Jamal his feelings for him because he didn't want to risk their friendship. Jamal scooted closer to Plissken and grabbed a controller. He joined the game and they continued to play for 30 minutes.
i honestly WANT to kms rn the way this passage is formed makes me want to end my life more
