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DatGuiser's Music Writing Career

over 7 years

At home, I am a part time song writer (admit it, you did it too)

I also got hit up about 2 weeks ago by the user named Disguiser (verumbark), who is a talented young music writer as well.

I wrote this song on Tuesday Night in about 30 minutes.

Tonight I put it on pastebin (on mobile, so expect inconsistencies for grammar and spelling)

I just want to know your thoughts about this:

https://pastebin.com/UwdNT3NU

Will add more later btw

about 7 years
someone bump this pls
about 7 years
i thought so too. lucid cant even handle him without leaving the site
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I was under the impression he wasn't seeing my posts
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Just be friends boys
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Orienteering says


Recidivism says

Imagine wanting to sound like the radio


imagine wanting to be popular. i wonder who does that :thinking:


Didn't you block me?
about 7 years

Recidivism says

Imagine wanting to sound like the radio


imagine wanting to be popular. i wonder who does that :thinking:
about 7 years
Burn down the disco
Hang the blessed DJ
Because the music that they constantly play
It says nothing to me about my life
Hang the blessed DJ
Because the music they constantly play
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If hip hop should die before I wake
I'll put an extended clip inside of my AK
Roll to every station, murder the DJ
Roll to every station, murder the DJ
about 7 years
the chainsmokers do a pretty good job of making their name appropriate because when i listen to them i feel like i might just have cancer
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Imagine wanting to sound like the radio
about 7 years
that means ur as good and as popular as The Chainsmokers right?
about 7 years

Orienteering says

i am saying i imqgine it sounding like the Chainsmokers if i add music in the background


woah
over 7 years

Jeff says

This is DatGuiser ? Lol


sure, why not?
over 7 years
i am saying i imqgine it sounding like the Chainsmokers if i add music in the background
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hey the man said he wanted to emulate Closer by The Chainsmokers, don't turn him off to my four post analysis of that exact song
over 7 years
This is DatGuiser ? Lol
over 7 years
so do it orienteering
over 7 years
>never said making music, but i am certainly capable dyl
over 7 years
writing words ≠ making music
over 7 years

groundhogday says

ur gonna need to learn how to do the work for making songs. there are people here who can help u do that. i think bebop is one of them.


oh lol i didn't even see this until now

yeah i produce my own music i'm working on an EP at the moment
over 7 years
what kinda genres are you looking into writing for
over 7 years
uh
over 7 years
https://epicmafia.com/topic/85000?page=3 u should ignore the stuff Kev wrote though
over 7 years
ur welcome orienteering. i didn't talk about the quality of the lyrics u wrote because i think that the kind of stuff ur trying to emulate is crap so i don't think i'm qualified to tell u if it's good since the best case from my point of view would be that it's sh*t that isn't too rank. also it's hard to think about it as music when there's no actual music. if ur goal is to write songs that become songs ur gonna need to learn how to do the work for making songs. there are people here who can help u do that. i think bebop is one of them. my opinion with the lyrics though is i think u should hold urself to high standards in whatever u do so i would recommend u to draw inspiration from poetic type songs. recidivism had a favorite lyrics thread with some good cool lyrics if u want to look there
over 7 years
thank you ian.

but what about this song?

tbh i actually see the verses and hook being like The Chainsmokers-Closer, the chorus like The Offspring-Gone Away (ikr) whenever i imagine this with music