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almost 9 years

[repost from bakerswag but i need exposure to build my name as an author so i'm bringing it to sandbox]

i always wanted somewhere to put my stories so ill practice being an author here please only positive criticism no haters wanted in my space you here that f*king idiots who reported my material on wattpad...

the death battle beginning

it was a dark and daring night, unlike any other nights. darren stood against the corpse he just created by killing the daemon. "daemons are easy to kill, it cleaning up that hard" he said as he grinned. clarice ran up to darren because she thought he was really cute and strong also he killed the daemon that was gonna kill her. "thank you for distroying it, darren" she said. he laughed. it was nothing to him, he's used to distroying daemons because he's a trained dameon hunter working for the syndicate. also his parents died when he was young so he is really tough and thinks things are funny like killing things.

"clarice you have to get out of here, it's sort of dangerous and i've got more daemons to distroy" he said. she was scared. the dark night got a bit more sinister and evil. darren realize it was too late and now something was gonna come for them. he gripped his sword which was about 7 feet long and it weighed a lot that most humans couldn't lift it but darren was strong because of his daemon hunting training. all of a sudden a giant creature that looked like hell came out of the ground! "get the hell away clarice" he said loudly. she said "no i can help you, i know how to help" and then he looked at her and smacked her on the face but lightly because he was just making a point "get the hell out of here idiot, i dont care about you" he said. she cried and ran away and a tear fell out of his eye. "sorry cupcake... i had to lie to get you to leave, i promise i will distroy this a-hole and then apollogies to you". he gripped his sword and lunged at the creature but it was really fast and just leaped past him. it grabbed clarice and jumped into the ground and taunted darren "i dare you to come to hell idiot" it said to him.

darren grabbed his sword "i'm gonna come to hell and then im gonna take my girl and then im gonna send you to hell and then i'm gonna take over hell" he said. darren had a plan and he was angry. you wouldn't like darren when he's angry...

i need people to say things to inspire me to write so basically tell me my story is good
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courageous of you to post this
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i'm not ready for this (i am)
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alex, incredible story
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awesome... wait for it... story
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good luck finishing this horror epic it scary
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clarice deserved it
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i think it's godo but it can get better
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did he died?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?
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I am an up and coming artist I hope to draw manga in japan please feature me in your story here is your vision, it isn't perfect because I need a new tablet but it is very good if I do say so myself
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every time i saw daemon i thought of matt damon
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can u add hellfire to him and red eyes
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Original character designed by me
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i need A good drawing of darren


will award you with being a daemon in th e next relase
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Bankai soon?
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this isn't spam this is art
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i'm gonna come to hell
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i didn't read the thread but wow my heart was pounding the whole time and i peed a little 5/7 would not-read again
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straight to video worthy
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too scary! i can't wait to see who you cast as the actors when this is made into a movie! (i think scarlett johansson should play clarice and jason momoa should play darren (x )
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I'll wait for the broadway show
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part 2 coming out next weekend it takes a lot to think and get in the shoes of darren