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My Immortal Appreciation Thread

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Here's where you can post about your favourite passages from the classic novella My Immortal.

(If you haven't heard of this infamous story, read it here. I promise, it won't disappoint. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8352390/1/My-Immortal-Original-story-reupload)

Who is your favourite character?
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Ebony "Enoby" Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way
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Hagrid
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Vlodemort / Tom Satan Bombodil/ Andorson
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Snap and Loopin
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Albert Dumblydore
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Ron "Diabolo" Weasley
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B'loody Mary Smith
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Good Charlotte
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Harry "Vampire" Potter
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Draco Malfoy
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On the night of the concert I put on my black lace-up boots with high heels. Underneath them were ripped red fishnets. Then I put on a black leather minidress with all this corset stuff on the back and front. I put on matching fishnet on my arms. I straightened my hair and made it look all spiky. I felt a little depressed then, so I sl-t one of my wr--ts. I read a depressing book while I waited for it to stop bleeding and I listened to some GC. I painted my nails black and put on TONS of black eyeliner. Then I put on some black lipstick. I didn’t put on foundation because I was pale anyway. I drank some human blood so I was ready to go to the concert.

I went outside. Draco was waiting there in front of his flying car. He was wearing a Simple Plan t-shirt (they would play at the show too), baggy black skater pants, black nail polish and a little eyeliner (AN: A lot fo kewl boiz wer it ok!).

“Hi Draco!” I said in a depressed voice.

“Hi Ebony.” he said back. We walked into his flying black Mercedes-Benz (the license plate said 666) and flew to the place with the concert. On the way we listened excitedly to Good Charlotte and Marilyn Manson. We both smoked cigarettes and drugs. When we got there, we both hopped out of the car. We went to the mosh pit at the front of the stage and jumped up and down as we listened to Good Charlotte.

“You come in cold, you're covered in blood
They're all so happy you've arrived
The doctor cuts your cord, hands you to your mom
She sets you free into this life.” sang Joel (I don’t own da lyrics 2 dat song).

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have no idea what this is about but voted Good Charlotte because Lifestyles of the Rich & Famous is my JAM
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One passage that really stands out to me is:


“Yah Satan told me abot you.” Lusian said. He pinted to a groop of sexxxy gottik guyz. They where siting in a corner kutting. It wuz Serious, Vampire’s dad and………………Snap! All of them were wearing blak eyeliner and blak Good Chralootte band shirts. “Lizzen I’m in a goth band wif those guys.” he said. “Were playing 2nite at da Marylin Mason show as back-up. “ORLY.” I ESKED.
- Chapter 35

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Or the immortality of this thread
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I thought it was one of those threads where we appreciated vancys immortality
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you ludicrous fools!